Aktuelle Zeit: 16.04.2024, 09:15

Alle Zeiten sind UTC




Ein neues Thema erstellen Auf das Thema antworten  [ 110 Beiträge ]  Gehe zu Seite Vorherige  1 ... 4, 5, 6, 7, 8  Nächste
Autor Nachricht
 Betreff des Beitrags:
BeitragVerfasst: 23.05.2011, 16:50 
Offline
Benutzeravatar

Registriert: 14.10.2008, 19:07
Beiträge: 309
Wohnort: USA
ho1291 hat geschrieben:
Part 22


"Why later ... mmm "

...


Have I told you lately that I love your stories?

I do!

:liebe3:

_________________
"Work like you don't need the money. Love like you've never been hurt. Dance like nobody's watching."
Satchel Paige


Nach oben
 Profil  
Mit Zitat antworten  
 Betreff des Beitrags:
Verfasst: 23.05.2011, 16:50 


Nach oben
  
 
 Betreff des Beitrags:
BeitragVerfasst: 23.05.2011, 17:45 
Offline
Moderator
Benutzeravatar

Registriert: 26.10.2009, 15:07
Beiträge: 10146
Wohnort: Belgien
:oops:

Thank you

:knicks:

_________________
Our live begins to end the day we become silent about things that matter.

Martin Luther King


Nach oben
 Profil  
Mit Zitat antworten  
 Betreff des Beitrags:
BeitragVerfasst: 23.05.2011, 20:00 
Offline
Benutzeravatar

Registriert: 23.03.2011, 05:37
Beiträge: 156
Wohnort: USA
Well worth the wait! Of course, always looking forward to more. Your stories are fantastic! Please don't stop. They are a pleasure to read. :spitze: :spitze: :ok: :tongue:


Nach oben
 Profil  
Mit Zitat antworten  
 Betreff des Beitrags:
BeitragVerfasst: 23.05.2011, 20:03 
Offline
Moderator
Benutzeravatar

Registriert: 26.10.2009, 15:07
Beiträge: 10146
Wohnort: Belgien
Thank you.

And no I won't stop. The story isn't over yet :wink:

_________________
Our live begins to end the day we become silent about things that matter.

Martin Luther King


Nach oben
 Profil  
Mit Zitat antworten  
 Betreff des Beitrags:
BeitragVerfasst: 23.05.2011, 20:59 
Offline
Benutzeravatar

Registriert: 23.03.2011, 05:37
Beiträge: 156
Wohnort: USA
Well, when this eventually does end, I hope you continue with more stories. I thick they are very well written. Excellent! Ciao! :mrgreen: :happyblue:


Nach oben
 Profil  
Mit Zitat antworten  
 Betreff des Beitrags:
BeitragVerfasst: 23.05.2011, 21:01 
Offline
Moderator
Benutzeravatar

Registriert: 26.10.2009, 15:07
Beiträge: 10146
Wohnort: Belgien
Well I've got some idea's already, So there might be more :wink:

_________________
Our live begins to end the day we become silent about things that matter.

Martin Luther King


Nach oben
 Profil  
Mit Zitat antworten  
 Betreff des Beitrags:
BeitragVerfasst: 17.06.2011, 14:46 
Offline
Benutzeravatar

Registriert: 31.01.2011, 10:27
Beiträge: 215
Ok...Game, set and match, all of them actually, in Paris, at Roland Garros are over...What happens with your story now? ????????

;P

_________________
any Carla in the real world?


Nach oben
 Profil  
Mit Zitat antworten  
 Betreff des Beitrags:
BeitragVerfasst: 17.06.2011, 15:02 
Offline
Moderator
Benutzeravatar

Registriert: 26.10.2009, 15:07
Beiträge: 10146
Wohnort: Belgien
My Muse is back. So with a little Luck the next part will be postet tonight.

:wink:

_________________
Our live begins to end the day we become silent about things that matter.

Martin Luther King


Nach oben
 Profil  
Mit Zitat antworten  
 Betreff des Beitrags:
BeitragVerfasst: 17.06.2011, 15:48 
Offline
Benutzeravatar

Registriert: 14.10.2008, 19:07
Beiträge: 309
Wohnort: USA
ho1291 hat geschrieben:
My Muse is back. So with a little Luck the next part will be postet tonight.

:wink:
:bigsuper:

_________________
"Work like you don't need the money. Love like you've never been hurt. Dance like nobody's watching."
Satchel Paige


Nach oben
 Profil  
Mit Zitat antworten  
 Betreff des Beitrags:
BeitragVerfasst: 17.06.2011, 15:50 
Offline
Moderator
Benutzeravatar

Registriert: 26.10.2009, 15:07
Beiträge: 10146
Wohnort: Belgien
Well my Muse is coming to me tomorrow, so maybe we will write the one after that together. Who knows. :wink:

_________________
Our live begins to end the day we become silent about things that matter.

Martin Luther King


Nach oben
 Profil  
Mit Zitat antworten  
 Betreff des Beitrags:
BeitragVerfasst: 19.06.2011, 18:43 
Offline
Moderator
Benutzeravatar

Registriert: 26.10.2009, 15:07
Beiträge: 10146
Wohnort: Belgien
Part 23

"Carla, what time do we have to be with Alain and Alegria"
"6.00. Why?"
"Let's get dressed and walk there, I'll tell you how I met Alain on the way there. Okay?"
"Yes, that's good. Say, Stella, you were not really in love with Marina, were you?"
"No, I like her, but no not in love. And you?"
"Once, but that was long ago. I always kept a soft spot for her, but in love now, no. You know, I've sometimes wondered whether we
could have had a solid relationship, if we would have met at any other time in my life."
"And?"
"I do not think so. I think she would have ran away quickly from the whole charade at Königsbrunn. Now that I am gone myself, I
understand that it is not a normal life there"
"But you're you were accustomed to it,so far?"
"That's true, but now that I live here with Sophia, I know that there are alternatives. Stella why did I not leave? I could have saved
myself, Sophia and you a lot of misery."
"Oh Carla, what has been has been. Now get dressed and let's go. I am so looking forward to seeing Sophia again"
"Maybe we should just call them and ask them if they tell Sophia you are coming?"
"No, we surprised her. Come dress up and go"

They walked hand in hand to Alain and Alegria.
"Stella, now tell me how you know of Alain"
"Well know, we've met in my hotel. He had a meeting and had some special wish. They asked me to come. He ordered some whiskey
brand that they did not know. We started talking. Later he came back and then we talked again and he told me about his gallery.
I notified him about the artworks that I needed for the hotel. And well, in one led to another the conversation turned to you"
"Why then?"
"He reported that he had a successor and, well, he quickly figured out the connection between you and me. I then asked him not to tell
you that I live and work in Paris,"
"Hmmm, and that he has not done"
"No, but I had to promise in return to give a sign of life, if only to Sophia, well and then I called Sophia"
"Hmmm so it was only about Sophia?"
"No. Not long after that you asked me to call Sophia, Carla, but when I heard your voice, I was already completely sold. ... Carla stop.
We are walking .... in the middle of.... the street"
"Okay, but how did he knew this morning that you are with me?"
"Uh, I do not know if Marina told you about her assignment for the opening?"
"What do you mean?"
"Well Alain has provided artwork for almost all of the hotel. Only in my office is still nothing. I uh, I asked Marina if she wants to make
another portrait of you, unless you do not mind that I hang the portrait from my bedroom in my office, because ... no ... stop ... do not
tickle.. Carla"
"Good continue, what's with Alain?"
"Marina has agreed and has told Alain that I am the client. We met last week and said he knew I was also going to La Champmesle
this weekend and ... "
"Wait, uh if I understand well. you all happen to know each other by coincident and I'm the only one who knew nothing about it?"
"Uh, well, know. Oh Carla, I have met them by chance, but if it had not happened, I might not have had the courage to call you and
certainly not start all over. Carla they have just given me a boost"
"Mm, I just do not understand why they have not told me"
"Because I asked them"
"Why?"
"Carla if you had known that I am in Paris, would you be able to control yourself?"
"I'm afraid not"
"Exactly, so I asked them to keep quiet. They had most difficulty with it, they said, because they saw that you were not doing well,
but they respected my request"
"And now?"
"Now we start start with restoring our relationship step by step. We will have to do some more planning, because we both have a job
outside the house now and in the hotel it is very hectic at the moment"
"Oh yes, and I've no nanny, like at Königsbrunn"
"Oh Sophia, I have missed her so. I wonder how she reacts when she sees me come in?"
"Perhaps it is wise if we ask Alain and Alegria to inform her that we are on our way"
"Uh, but we're already there"
"Okay, well then just get in and we'll see how she responds"

Alain saw they were coming and had already opened the door.
"Carla, Stella, come inside. Sophia is in the kitchen with Alegria and knows nothing"
"Thank you Alain. Uh what do we do Stella?"
"Get in the kitchen and we surprise her"
"Mama! You're ... Stella?"


...

_________________
Our live begins to end the day we become silent about things that matter.

Martin Luther King


Nach oben
 Profil  
Mit Zitat antworten  
 Betreff des Beitrags:
BeitragVerfasst: 19.06.2011, 18:56 
Offline
Benutzeravatar

Registriert: 23.03.2011, 05:37
Beiträge: 156
Wohnort: USA
:skol: Cheers! No matter the language, always happy to finally read a sequel! Glad to see it continues. Ciao! :happysmilie:


Nach oben
 Profil  
Mit Zitat antworten  
 Betreff des Beitrags:
BeitragVerfasst: 19.06.2011, 19:05 
Offline
Moderator
Benutzeravatar

Registriert: 26.10.2009, 15:07
Beiträge: 10146
Wohnort: Belgien
Off course it will continue. I'm just writing a little slower then usualy :wink:

_________________
Our live begins to end the day we become silent about things that matter.

Martin Luther King


Nach oben
 Profil  
Mit Zitat antworten  
 Betreff des Beitrags:
BeitragVerfasst: 26.08.2011, 10:35 
Offline
Moderator
Benutzeravatar

Registriert: 26.10.2009, 15:07
Beiträge: 10146
Wohnort: Belgien
Part 24

"Hi Sophia. How are you ... no don’t cry. Come to me "
Stella took Sophia in her arms and tried to comfort her.
"Why are you crying? Are you not happy to see me? "
"Shocked"
"Of what? Of me? "
"Yes"
"Why?"
"Mama would come and now you come and Alegria said nothing and I do not have my drawing with me"
"Oh, that don’t matter. Just come with mom and bring it to me in my office "
"Oh yes. Mama, we're going to Stella's hotel. Are we now going home to get the drawing and get to the hotel? "
"No, Sophia, Alegria has cooked a lovely meal. We first have a nice dinner and then go home"
"But is Stella coming?"
"Stella?"
"Yes, I’ll go with you . I will take you to bed and then go back to my house "
"Why? Don’t you want to stay with us? "
"Sophia, Stella has her own house. As in Dusseldorf "
"But mom ..."
"Come on Sophia, first we go and have dinner"
"But the picture?"
"We are going to bring it tomorrow"
"Uh Carla, you must be a model for Marina tomorrow?"
"Oh, Alain, that I almost forgot. Mmm, I would like to forget it"
"Carla, don’t be foolish, it will be a beautiful portrait. Marina is very talented and the mission is clear. Gosh, you
will have to adjust that you have to be patient and not allowed to do or decide anything. Say Sophia, I have tomorrow
afternoon off. Shall we go to the zoo together, for mom can not. She has to work."
"Yeah, Mom is that allowed?"
"Of course my dear, you go and enjoy tomorrow afternoon with Stella. But on one condition."
"What Mom?"
"I'll come to Stella’s home tomorrow, but I do want those delicious pancakes that we made last time together"
"Yes, Stella then we make pancakes"
"Of course Sophia. We do, but first at the table "

They walked to the dining table. Stella pulled Carla back.

"What was that grin when you asked for those pancakes?"
"Nothing. It has just taken me one day to clean up the kitchen after Sophia had baked pancakes. Only the spot of
brambles I do not get of the wall"
"Ah, revenge because you have no control at all tomorrow"

"Mama, Stella, no kissing but eating"

...

_________________
Our live begins to end the day we become silent about things that matter.

Martin Luther King


Nach oben
 Profil  
Mit Zitat antworten  
Beiträge der letzten Zeit anzeigen:  Sortiere nach  
Ein neues Thema erstellen Auf das Thema antworten  [ 110 Beiträge ]  Gehe zu Seite Vorherige  1 ... 4, 5, 6, 7, 8  Nächste

Alle Zeiten sind UTC


Wer ist online?

0 Mitglieder


Ähnliche Beiträge

Claudia Hiersche Love Match
Forum: Claudia Hiersche
Autor: GIRLFRIEND
Antworten: 26
Paris! Game, Set & Match?
Forum: Fanfiction Unvollendet - Inaktiv
Autor: Hoffie
Antworten: 528
Game of Thrones
Forum: Serien von A-Z
Autor: DaniKleines
Antworten: 37
Parijs! Game, Set & Match?
Forum: Verhalen
Autor: Hoffie
Antworten: 212

Du darfst keine neuen Themen in diesem Forum erstellen.
Du darfst keine Antworten zu Themen in diesem Forum erstellen.
Du darfst deine Beiträge in diesem Forum nicht ändern.
Du darfst deine Beiträge in diesem Forum nicht löschen.

Suche nach:
Gehe zu:  
cron
Powered by phpBB® Forum Software © phpBB Group



Bei iphpbb3.com bekommen Sie ein kostenloses Forum mit vielen tollen Extras
Forum kostenlos einrichten - Hot Topics - Tags
Beliebteste Themen: Liebe, NES, TV, USA, Erde

Impressum | Datenschutz